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Walking with Familiar Whispers
(Written to "Remember Tomorrow" by "Iron Maiden")
I long for the comfort, of the one I adore
To keep me safe, to keep me warm
To tell me they love me, as they fall from my tears
All ive adored, has made me scared
All that ive known, all that ive cared
All the past pain, has made me prepared
One more chance, a light in the sky
Somebody to hold me, somebody to die
Tears on the eyeline, tears from my heart
Tears from my friends, with my final depart
Out in the courtyard, the moon takes it place
Questioning sorrow, and whitening my face
(Written to "Remember Tomorrow" by "Iron Maiden")
I long for the comfort, of the one I adore
To keep me safe, to keep me warm
To tell me they love me, as they fall from my tears
All ive adored, has made me scared
All that ive known, all that ive cared
All the past pain, has made me prepared
One more chance, a light in the sky
Somebody to hold me, somebody to die
Tears on the eyeline, tears from my heart
Tears from my friends, with my final depart
Out in the courtyard, the moon takes it place
Questioning sorrow, and whitening my face
I long for someone else, but i dont believe i could cope with another break up. All i choose cause me pain.
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this is good
although id chang the "somebody" int he 4th line of the 2nd stanza into "somone" .. i think it fits better rhythmically
although id chang the "somebody" int he 4th line of the 2nd stanza into "somone" .. i think it fits better rhythmically